Texte d'anglais correction faute plz c'est urgent

Salut je viens d'écrrie un texte d'anglais que je dois rendre demain   quelqu'un peut il corriger mes fautes ??
merci

Marcus’s mother is too strict. The parents must educate their children and inculcate them the good manners but doesn’t impose her choices, the way of getting dressed and of feeding. Every person has the right to choose what is convenient for him most especially in clothe and in food. The children have to have the right of decider certain things in their life of a way must to be able to assert it when they will be adults. The parents are there to meet their need and direct them on the good way and not to oblige them have to live and have to think as them.

If I was on the place of Marcus I would rebel. At the house I eat the meals which my mother prepares me. She pays attention on the preferences of each. I do not like sometimes something but one does not force me to eat it. As for clothe I am going to buy them with my mother, I buy what I want and if my mother is going to buy them only she knows what I prefer and as a rule they please me.