Texte d'anglais correction faute plz c'est urgent
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Salut je viens d'écrrie un texte d'anglais que je dois rendre demain 
quelqu'un peut il corriger mes fautes ??
merci
Marcus’s mother is too strict. The parents must educate their children and inculcate them the good manners but doesn’t impose her choices, the way of getting dressed and of feeding. Every person has the right to choose what is convenient for him most especially in clothe and in food. The children have to have the right of decider certain things in their life of a way must to be able to assert it when they will be adults. The parents are there to meet their need and direct them on the good way and not to oblige them have to live and have to think as them.
If I was on the place of Marcus I would rebel. At the house I eat the meals which my mother prepares me. She pays attention on the preferences of each. I do not like sometimes something but one does not force me to eat it. As for clothe I am going to buy them with my mother, I buy what I want and if my mother is going to buy them only she knows what I prefer and as a rule they please me.
| ftb@IDN a écrit : Dommage je ne peut pas t'aider j'ai un 8,6 de moyenne en anglai enfin je suis une pouriture en cette matière. |
Tu n'as pas l'air très bon en Français également 
Sinon, pour ton texte.
Marcus’s mother is too strict. Parents must educate their children and inculcate them the good manners but don’t have to impose their choices in getting dressed and food. Every person has the right to choose what is convenient for him most especially in clothes and food. Children should have to choose certain things in their life of a way must to be able to assert it when they will be adults. Parents are here to meet their need and direct them on the good way and not to oblige them have to live and have to think as them.
If I was instead of Marcus I would rebel. At home I eat meals my mother prepares me. She pays attention on the preferences of each. Sometimes I do not like but she doesn't force me to eat. As for clothes I am going to buy it with my mother, I buy what I want and if my mother is going to buy it alone she knows what I prefer and as a rule they please me.
Voilà, j'ai mis en rouge les phrases que je ne comprends pas trop (ou dont le sens m'échappe).
Dans tous les cas, ton texte est amélioré. Mais bon, si quelqu'un de meilleur que moi en Anglais trouve à redire, pas de problèmes .
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