URGENT essay( besoin correction)

Coucou tout le monde, voilà j'ai deux introductions de rédaction à rédiger en anglais et je voulais vous demander si quelqu un pouvait corriger mes fautes please..? et me dire si c'est bien rédiger ou pas..et si c'est cohérent ce que j'ai écrit. merci d'avance
Bonne journée


First introduction:
Celibrity has always been a tropical issue all around the world. Nobody can pretend he never heard of Madonna or Lady Diana.
Since the sixties the power of the media has grown and because of the TV, the radio and the large circulation of newspaper and magasines. Some people see royalty and celebrity's life like it is a fairy-tale or another world. People are so fascinated that their curiosity go very far and they can be at least satisfied when they watch tabloid.Thus, we may wonder whether people are more envious about stardom or whether it is just a hobby? how can (or why) some people live by proxy?



Second introduction:
It is a well known fact that the father has always been the strongest character in the family and the one who brings home the bacon. The mother though used to be a housewife and the affectionate one with her children. Since then women are taken into account and they are as much active as men. There is still a lot of family who keep the traditional education that is to say only man has authority. At last we may wonder who should enforce discipline in a family? should it be both parents? Is one parent capable to maintain order among children?

ah...c'est une bonne question..est ce que quelqu un saurait par hasard?

C'est vraiment URGENT esce ke quelqu un pourrait me rendre ce service de me corriger ma rédac svp!! soyez sympa svp!! jen ai besoin pr demain!!!pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaassseeeeeeeeee j ai vraiment besoin daide!