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Peu de fautes.

John McTive
52 Belford Avenue
London



Oxford, February 25th, 2007




Dear dad,


I hope you're fine and that everything is well since I left home to go to university. I'm sorry for answering so late but I haven't found time to write to you because I'm working very hard these days.

First I'd like to tell you that I'm very ashamed of the pair of wings tattooed on the back of my neck. This tattoo bothers me when I'm trying to do my homework. I really regret having it because I've got to keep this awful tattoo forever.
I know that I should have listened to you. But I'm very grateful to you for trying to convince me. How stupid I was!

Moreover, you can't understand how much I regret. In all my life, it's the biggest mistake that I have ever made.
On the other hand, Beckham hasn't been playing very well, England has been disqualified because of him and so on... Beckham isn't my hero anymore...
You were right about this tattoo, it is definitely too big and too showy! All my friends tell me that I look like a hooligan.

If only I had realized these problems before... I wish I had made a mehndi tattoo instead of this tattoo on the back of my neck in order to not regret it later. I regret not having heard of mehndi tattoos before!

By the way, do you know what mehndi is about? Well, it's the application of henna as a temporary form of skin decoration. It's typically employed for special occasions, particularly weddings.
Nowadays mehndi decorations become fashionable in Europe. It's just like the other tattoos except that it remains almost a fortnight.

Now, I'm keen(?) on a talented guitar player nicknamed 'the Blackwind'. As he's a skin-headed, body-pierced guy, I'm dying to get my nose and my tongue pierced!
Could you give me your opinion? I don't wanna (ce n'est pas faux mais... c'est un devoir que tu rends!) want to make another mistake...


That's all for now, I've got a lot of work.
Give my love to mum.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon...


Lot's of love


Your son, Peter McTive

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