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Noon or evening, more and more consumers prefer choose takeaway food rather than the meal prepared at home. If among young people,the phenomenon is entered in life style for long time, it seems extend to the rest of the population.

The persons who consume the most these products are generally those who live alone or who have no more the time or more envy to make eat because they are absorbed by their professional activity which takes them all their time.Therefore, they seek facility and quickness.Indeed, they will just have to buy a sandwich in the corner of their street. These persons will not need to make of shopping in a supermarket and thus will spare time. On the other hand, they will have no do the dishes. It is well known that numerous workers count on proximity commerce for their meal. The takeaway food can be at the same time nourishing and economic. Indeed, a takeaway meal remain much cheaper than a meal in a restaurant.Also, this solution is practical especially when the envy to make eat is not present or when we have not the time to take what feed in the morning. More and more persons decide to eat a sandwich in the evening at the house and haven't any more take time to cook. We can take for example "Mc Drive" of the famous sign Mc Do.This method is rapid and simplified because the customer takes out even no more his car. Furthermore,it is accessible at any time: "aussi bien le jour que la nuit". Takeaway food can be also an advantage for certain persons when these have no talent for the cooking or if they have no idea of the meal to be cooked.These new modes of consumptions translate the fact that the time prove to be more and more precious. However, these changes have also consequences on the health because takeaway food such as hamburgers or pizzas are very often higher in calories than those whom we prepare at home. Also, I think that this phenomenon facilitates the eroding at certain persons. Finally, all these modern practices to feed are multiple factors which contribute to intensify the taking of the solitary meals. The access to the food is more and more easy, and the individuals "ne prennent plus la peine de se réunir" to eat in community.

As a result, this phenomenon becomes more and more spread because takeaway food possess numerous advantages. However, although this method (formule?) is practical, fast and little expensive, the question of the obesity remains present.

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