Je n'ai pas pour habitude d'aller sur des forums mais la j'ai un problème car j'ai un écrit à faire pour un article de journal mais le problème c'est que c'est en anglais donc j'aurais besoin de l'aide de qqn pour me corriger.Merci d'avance.le thème est technology is harmful for the environment.

At present , the question of environment is became a question topical .Since Man by his activities domestics,agricultural and industrial, do damage to his environment.From now on there is a veritable become aware of Man.For that , there is of events shock as Tchernobyl in nineteen eighty-six.Nevertheless,we may wonder whether technology is really harmful for the environment . At first sight,us reflex will be answer:"of course".Indeed,for us to do became aware of this impact.For instance,the problems of the pollution who touch all the planet.Owing to rejection of polluting in atmosphere because of the combustion of fuels of vehicle but too the smoke of factory .Moreover gas to throw out in atmosphere harmful for the health of mankind.Similarly they are originally of greenhouse effect.We may infer that than technology ,vehicle and factory,is originally of the destruction of environment.In addition to that it is gas could too bring about the gobal warming.Similarly water can be to pollute too , as for instance in China , or fishing hat reduce owing to the pollution .Besides in the same case now there are bigger aeroplanes which use more fuel. In a secont time,after probems industrial,problems agriculture.Even if Man are more efficient in agriculture thanks to GM organism (OGM).Indeed GM organism permit to reduce the use of week-killer.On the other hand GM organism is a risk for environment because GM organism will can to lead to of risk of allergy in animal and human being. Once of more technology is harmful for the environment.At last, because of modern technology we have deforrestation in some countries.Indeed that bring about the erosion of soil and in certain case a real desert.Even if certain case it is opposite as for instance the sending of satellite in space is not harmful for the environment.Nevertheless,after it is example it must be admitted than technology is harmful for the environment.That's why of multinational react in institute

merci d'avance.

même si vous ne corrigez pas tout ,c'est pas grave merci d'avance.

Salut

Dur dur l'Anglais!
-- At present , the question of environment is became a question topical
Je laisserai au présent: becomes a topical question.
Désolé je ne comprends pas la deuxième phrase....
3eme non plus
-- For that , there is of events shock as Tchernobyl in nineteen eighty-six.
For that there is some shock events like Tchernobyl ...
-- At first sight,us reflex will be answer:"of course"
At first sight, our reflex will be to answer...
-- Indeed,for us to do became aware of this impact???
-- For instance,the problems of the pollution who touch all the planet. Pourquoi who? Si on l'enlève ca devient For instance the pollution problems touch all the planet.

Je continue un peu plus tard....