Bonjour, besoin d'aide pour la coreection de mon dialogue
The girl: Hello! mama how are you
Mam : fine thanks and your journey with your father ?
The girl: it was super ! i love papa ! he is great and we have visit the zoo !
Mam: I am jealous
The girl : No, mam ! i would sait that father is different of you! Today, it the happiest day of my live!
Mam: I have seen that you are happy I have seen in your eye two lights ! i don't say why..
The girl: Mam, why are you divorced ! i will said that papa love you encore ! He said me before ! he said that his life don't exist depuis you are quite it.
Mam: J'ai refais ma vie!
The girl: why are you jealous ? I don't understand ! I am the the daughter of you 2.
Mam : yes, i know but you see ! it is difficult ! Since the separation with your father , i would not to share you with your father because i am afraid à l'idée that you decide to leave me my baby
We have visited the zoo.
I would say that daddy is different of you !
Today, it's the ...
I will say ==> tu veux pas dire plutôt "je veux te dire que" ? dans ce cas c'est plutôt I want to tell you that daddy love you.
His life doesn't exist
Depuis ==> Since
Salut !
pas très drole ton dialogue.... mes deux enfants sont avec leur mères et je ne les vois pas assez souvent....
But life is life.
Je prends la suite de le Grandefolle car il ne faut pas contrarier les fous (je rigooole)
I want to tell to you that papa(daddy?)'s still loving you.He said his life doesn't exist since you have leaved him.
Mam: I have a new life now!
The girl: Why.... I am your daughter too.
Mam I'm afraid to think that you could decide to ...
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