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Starry Night


1. Type of document and origin

This document is one of the Van Gogh’s masterpieces. He painted it in june 1889 when he was confined to a mental hospital in Saint Rémy.
The painting, entitled “Starry Night” is exhibited at the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New-York city. This painting shows the village of Saint Rémy at night.


2. Topic and description

The subject of this painting is a village, called Saint Rémy which is represented during a starry night. It can be divided into 3 parts which are the village, the sky and the tree. The dominant colours are dark blue, black and yellow.
On the first part, the painter used small yellow strokes to suggest lights in the houses and show that there’s life in the village. The village look calm and safe.

In the upper part, the painter painted the sky with 10 yellow stars and a quarter moon.
The painter used circling yellow and white strokes to represent a whirlwind of swirfing clouds.

In the bottom hand corner we can see a tree which may be a cypress. It’s the darkest element in the painting and it looks like a black fire with swirling flames. We can’t really see the whole background because of the size of the tree and its situation, in the foreground.



3. Message behind the picture, main feelings convoyed, purpose

The painting give an impression of insulation because the village is alone. It express the mental suffering of Vincent Van Gogh who wants us to feel it. The village expresses his loneliness because of his mental problems and the cypress give an expression of fear.
Van Gogh wants us to understand what he endures every days, behind a painting.

4. Opinion, personal reaction

I think the village represent the Van Gogh’s life because the houses are right and réalistic and are in contrast with the remainder of the painting. It evoques his normal life, when he was not sick.

The sky expresses to me the interior of its head, we can see stars which represent the destruction of him. The curved strokes show the damages of the disease in his brain and his mental disordered.

And the cypress, I think it evoques the disease, the virus which is destroying him, the virus is infiltrating and is attacking the sky, which represent his brain.

This painting reminds me of my sister’s depression in 2005.
I’m not really like this painting but I find it beautiful and I find it expresses a lot of feelings which is important for a painting.
which is important for a painting.