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Le sujet était : "What kind of a shopper are you ? Are you inflluenced by your parents, friends, or advertising ? Do you compare prodructs before buying or are you a compulsive buyer ?" (150-200 words)


I don’t think I’m a big shopper. I like buying things that I really need, or who really pleases to me. I rarely make the stores : I do it when I really need something. I believe that I am not very influenced in this field. Indeed, I don’t have the impression that advertising plays an important role in my purchases. In the same way, my parents advise me, but don’t really intervene in my choices. Lastly, my friends say what they think, but let me decide. Thus, sometimes I compare some products to make economies if it ‘s possible, but from time to time I have the ones envies greediness, and I cannot resist.

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