Aide pour correction en anglais

Bonsoir,

J'aimerai savoir si vous pouviez m'aider à corriger mes fautes pour mon devoir d'anglais à rendre vendredi !

Merci :

New-York,

Dear family,

I miss you. I hope you are all fine and everything is going well. When I took the boat to leave Russia I was very lonely. I didn't know what to do. The boat go threw europa and there were French, German, Italian, Polish people. It was difficult for me to communicate with any of them because of the language. Nevertheless I could see they were nervous ... as me. I was so afraid that they might send me back. Russians would kill me !
The boat arrived three weeks later at Ellis Island in Manhattan, New-York. The American dream was so close to me. But I had to cross a last step. We all had to be examinated by a doctor. We were in a harbor and the doctor asked me questions. I was so panic-stricken. He asked me questions about my wound. I fear that he might not believe me because I wouldn't not say the truth. Then he told me to go to another inspection. I was desperate. I tought the American Dream was already over. I couldn't remain calm. But the second doctor was nice. He examinated me and let me enter America.
I was now master of my future. I would wish to find a place where to live and a job but it was going to be difficult. The night I slept in the street and I was frightened that Russian pursued me and killed me and the day I begged for money and food. Sometimes I could watch people in stores and I dreamed that I could do like salesman and earn money decently like everybody else. And one day I met Ted, a British who also speak Russian. He lodged me at his place and found me a job in the firm of his father : Mc Donald's ! I hope one day I climb the level and I would open my own Mc Donald's in Russia when nazi would leave !

See you soon.

Love,
Light,
Peace,
Jacob.

Thank you !