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Bonjour!
J'aurais besoin qu'une personne me regarde mon essay d'Anglais s'il vous plaît je dois absolument remonter ma moyenne
I'll go to work during my work experience, this year, in the restaurant’s parents. The restaurant is in “Saint Cyr l’école”. It is a little restaurant.
I go to the restaurant’s parents because I know how to do because I go to help my parents all Friday and I did not want to go to search the work. I'll work at 12h00 about 14h30, Monday until Saturday. I think I will do the waitress, prepare the cocktails, to take down the telephone and prepare ice cream. But I do not like to be the waitress because I always must to smile and to be nice. I think this week in work experience it is rather more holiday because I can to wake up at 11h00. I am not very to press to do this because teachers like to give us many homeworks and many big test but it is cool too because I have more one week to search the present’s Christmas.
But I am sure that I do not want to be a waitress because it is too hard, we must to finish very late and we must to work during celebrates. I prefer to work in a office because we have more free time and celebrates you do not work and we do not finish too much late.
Merci d'avance
Message édité par helenedu78 le 12-12-2006 à 19:45:48
salut c'est tout bon
c'est vrai
I'll go to work during my work experience, this year, in the parents' restaurant. The restaurant is in “Saint Cyr l’école”. It is a little restaurant.
I go to the parents' restaurant because I know how to do because I go to help my parents all Friday and I did not want to go to search the work. I'll work from 12am to 2pm and a half, Monday until Saturday. I think I will do the waitress, prepare the cocktails, take down the telephone and prepare ice creams. But I do not like to be the waitress because I always have to smile and to be nice. I think this week in work experience is rather more holiday because I can wake up at 11am. I am not very to press (??) to do this because teachers like to give us a lot of homework and many important tests but it is also cool because I have more one week to search the presents for Christmas.
But I am sure that I do not want to be a waitress because it is too hard, we have to finish very late and we must work during celebrates. I prefer to work in an office because we have more free time and celebrates you do not work and we do not finish so late.
Tu pourrais écrire en français ce que tu veux dire stp avec 'because I go to help my parents all Friday and I did not want to go to search the work' ?
parce que je vais aider mes parents tous les Vendredis soir and je ne voulais pas aller chercher de stage
| helenedu78 a écrit : parce que je vais aider mes parents tous les Vendredis soir and je ne voulais pas aller chercher de stage |
Donc 'because I help my parents each friday' (chaque vendredi).
To go s'emploie pour la notion de déplacement, pas pour les prévisions comme en français ; si tu voulais dire 'j'irai travailler', c'est I'll work ou I'm going to work, I'll go to work = je me rendrai au travail.
Idem pour 'didn't want to go to search' : je ne voulais pas chercher = I didn't want to search
okay merci beaucoup
De rien
Au fait I'm not very to press = ? Je ne suis pas pressée ? Si oui, il faut écrire I'm not in a hurry.
Ah oui, et encore une faute sur 'rather more holiday', je pense, mais là dessus je sèche
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