anglais 2nd
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alor pour le 27 février j'ai un paragraphe d'une demi page a faire sur les homeless en faite il faut parler de la vie d'un homeless comment il a fait pour en arriver là et comment il le vi
donc si vous pourriez me le faire vite fait bien fait vu que je suis une brel
15 mn de votre temps va me faire gagner une 10 de jours
merci d'avance
donc si vous pourriez me le faire vite fait bien fait vu que je suis une brel
15 mn de votre temps va me faire gagner une 10 de jours
merci d'avance
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Comme John n'est pas arrivé à faire un paragraphe d'une demi page sur les homeless pour le 27 février (en faite il faut parler de la vie d'un homeless comment il a fait pour en arriver là et comment il le vi), il est devenu SDF et depuis il le vit mal: il pense qu'il est une brel(le) et que s'il avait pris 2 heures pour faire son devoir, il n'en serait pas là.
je croi que t'a pas trés bien compri mon niveau en anglais c pas ac 2 malheureuse petite heure que j'y serai arrivé et de tout facon s'il me fallait que 2h je l'orai fait depuis longtemps
bon encore la prof le ramasserai et le noterai là je m'en fou je marque nimporte quoi ms elle a dit qu'on allé le récité chacun notre tour et qu'elle corrigera les fautes en méme temps qu'on le dit
alor... quelle galère
bon encore la prof le ramasserai et le noterai là je m'en fou je marque nimporte quoi ms elle a dit qu'on allé le récité chacun notre tour et qu'elle corrigera les fautes en méme temps qu'on le dit
alor... quelle galère
bon j'ai essayé ca ac l'aide de my father
ca raconte l'histoire d'un homme qui a perdu toute sa famille dans un accident de voiture et pour faire passer la douleur de leur mort il boit et devient alcolique a cause de ca il perd son emploi et devient un sans abri ac tous les problémes que ca aucause
A Day in the Life of a Homeless Person.
I am going to tell you about a day in the life of Joe Wino. Joe is homeless and a drunk. At one time he was a successful business man. He lost his family in an auto accident. After the accident he could not function. He started to drink to make the pain of his loss go away. He soon could not function at work and got fired. Then he lost his house and found himself in the streets.
During the warm parts of the year he sleeps on park benches, in alleys, in abandoned buildings, bus stop shelters or anywhere else he can lay down and go to sleep. During the winter if the shelters are full he tries to find something inside. It may not be heated he has some blankets to help keep the cold out of his body.
All of his belongings are in a plastic bag. In the morning he gets up and heads for the garbage cans and dumpsters. He looks for bottles that he can turn in for the deposit money, food or something to drink. He likes the dumpsters behind the restaurants because they sometimes have food, especially after meal times. If he is lucky he will not have to spend money on food. That gives him more for his liquid refreshment.
Joe is at the bus stop and when the bus stops he gets on and asks if anyone can help him with bus fare. If there is a sucker he gets the fare and jumps off. He can't do this to often because each driver remembers him and will eventually stop picking him up. When he gets enough for a cheap half pint he goes to the liquor store and buys the cheapest half pint he can find.
Some times someone will take him to get food. Then he sells it for more cheep booze. Many of those on the streets are drug addicts too. Some have lost a limb or two because of their addiction. You see them on crutches, in wheel chairs or hopping around on one leg. During the day they are downtown begging from the office workers and shoppers. If the aren't causing problems the police look the other way.
Joe's day is spent walking, begging, checking garbage and having an occasional nap. As night falls he starts to think about where he will sleep. He finds a place in an abandoned building. He has a bottle that he will drink until he passes out. If he is lucky he will wake up in the morning. Maybe if he is lucky he will not wake up in the morning. If it's cold he may freeze to death. He may be killed by another homeless person or some sick killer. He may die from the cheap booze.
How lucky he is depends on his living or if his death is painless. No one will miss him. No one will care. He is a lost and forgotten soul. Maybe is he is gone someone may wonder what happened to that bum that used to beg here. Maybe one person will miss him. I may miss him.
When we go if one person realizes we are gone then we were not totally lost.
ps: si y a des fotes de orth si vous puoviez les corrigés
ca raconte l'histoire d'un homme qui a perdu toute sa famille dans un accident de voiture et pour faire passer la douleur de leur mort il boit et devient alcolique a cause de ca il perd son emploi et devient un sans abri ac tous les problémes que ca aucause
A Day in the Life of a Homeless Person.
I am going to tell you about a day in the life of Joe Wino. Joe is homeless and a drunk. At one time he was a successful business man. He lost his family in an auto accident. After the accident he could not function. He started to drink to make the pain of his loss go away. He soon could not function at work and got fired. Then he lost his house and found himself in the streets.
During the warm parts of the year he sleeps on park benches, in alleys, in abandoned buildings, bus stop shelters or anywhere else he can lay down and go to sleep. During the winter if the shelters are full he tries to find something inside. It may not be heated he has some blankets to help keep the cold out of his body.
All of his belongings are in a plastic bag. In the morning he gets up and heads for the garbage cans and dumpsters. He looks for bottles that he can turn in for the deposit money, food or something to drink. He likes the dumpsters behind the restaurants because they sometimes have food, especially after meal times. If he is lucky he will not have to spend money on food. That gives him more for his liquid refreshment.
Joe is at the bus stop and when the bus stops he gets on and asks if anyone can help him with bus fare. If there is a sucker he gets the fare and jumps off. He can't do this to often because each driver remembers him and will eventually stop picking him up. When he gets enough for a cheap half pint he goes to the liquor store and buys the cheapest half pint he can find.
Some times someone will take him to get food. Then he sells it for more cheep booze. Many of those on the streets are drug addicts too. Some have lost a limb or two because of their addiction. You see them on crutches, in wheel chairs or hopping around on one leg. During the day they are downtown begging from the office workers and shoppers. If the aren't causing problems the police look the other way.
Joe's day is spent walking, begging, checking garbage and having an occasional nap. As night falls he starts to think about where he will sleep. He finds a place in an abandoned building. He has a bottle that he will drink until he passes out. If he is lucky he will wake up in the morning. Maybe if he is lucky he will not wake up in the morning. If it's cold he may freeze to death. He may be killed by another homeless person or some sick killer. He may die from the cheap booze.
How lucky he is depends on his living or if his death is painless. No one will miss him. No one will care. He is a lost and forgotten soul. Maybe is he is gone someone may wonder what happened to that bum that used to beg here. Maybe one person will miss him. I may miss him.
When we go if one person realizes we are gone then we were not totally lost.
ps: si y a des fotes de orth si vous puoviez les corrigés
ben j'ai survolé ton texte, il est bien au niveau des temps je pense que c'est bon après je suis pas prof d'anglais et je n'ai fait que survolé mais sinon c'est bien, je pense que tu devrais accentué un peu plus au début le faite qu'il n'arrive plus à remonter la pente...mais sinon c bien, pour les fautes de voc je ne sais pas
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