Anglais , corriger mes fautes , si une personne peut se porter volontaire svp ?

C’était la première fois que j'allais à l’école.
J'étais surexcitée ce jour-là, à l'idée de me trouver parmi des enfants que je ne connaissais pas, surtout que mon frère aîné allait déjà à l'école. Maman avait confectionné une jolie petite robe, brodée Maeva sur le haut. Mais j'étais un peu garçon manqué ; en route pour l'école, j'ai poursuivi un chat errant jusque dans un chantier de bois ! J'ai trébuché et déchiré ma robe ; aussi, le joli ruban rose que je portais dans mes cheveux s'est défait. A l'école Maternelle, il y avait des vélos, des trottinettes, des enfants qui n’arrêtaient pas de m’embêter. Ce premier jour, j’ai jeté du sable dans le visage d’une petite fille et j’ai été punie.
En classe, ma maîtresse me racontait des histoires tous les jours, et on faisait beaucoup de jeux, c'était super !


My first day of school

It was the first time when I went to the school.
I was so excited on my first day of school to be with children whom I did not know, especially my older brother already went to the school.. Mother had made me a small dress white with embroidery Maeva on the bib. But I was a bit of a tomboy and on my way to school I chased a stray cat into a lumber yard! I tripped, tore my dress, and my pretty pink hair ribbon came undone.
To the nursery school, there were cycles, scooters, children who did not stop annoying me. This first day, I threw some sand in the face of a girl and I was punished.
In class, my teacher told me histories every day, and we made many games, it was great!

C'est surement remplit de fautes lol ....Une personne pourrait y jeter un coup d'oeil svp ????
Merciiiiiii :-D

slt ! voilà ce que je te propose ! parce que je suis désolée de te le dire mais tu as fait des fautes de grammaire anglaise ! donc voilà mais j'en ai peut-être fait moi-même !

It was the first time that I went to the school. I was over-excited this day, with the idea to find me among children whom I did not know, especially that my elder brother went already to the school. Mom had made a nice small dress, embroidered Maeva on the top. But I was a little real tomboy; on the way for the school, I continued a cat wandering until in a wood building site! I stumbled and tore my dress; also, the pretty pink ribbon that I carried in my hair east demolishes. At the nursery school, there were bicycles, child's scooters, children who did not stop annoying me. This first day, I threw sand in the face of a small girl and I was punished. In class, my mistress told me stories tous.les.jours, and one did many plays, it was great !

I chased a stray cat into a lumber yard!

cette phrase n'était pas bonne ?

je t'ai traduit d'une façon mais je pense qu'on peut le traduire autrement sinon c'est vrai comme le dit titemoua que le mot à mot c'est pas super pour une traduction !

On m'a dit qu'avec Already faut du present perfect, j'ai modifié des petites choses d'après vous est ce que c'est bon là :

My first day of school

It was the first time (that) I went to (the) school. I was over-excited this day, with the idea to find me among children whom I did not know, especially that my elder brother has already been to school. My mother made me a nice small dress, embroidered Maeva on the top. But I was a little tomboy; on the way for (the) school, I met a cat wandering until in a wood building site ! I stumbled and tore my dress; also, the pretty pink ribbon that I carried in my hair east demolishes. At the nursery school, there were bicycles, scooters, and children who did not stop annoying me. This first day, I threw sand in the face of a small girl and I was punished. In class, my mistress told me stories every days, and one did many plays, it was exellent !

My first day of school

It was the first time (that) I went to (the) school. I was over-excited this day, with the idea to find me among children whom I did not know, especially that my elder brother has already been to school. My mother made me a nice small dress, embroidered Maeva on the top. But I was a little tomboy; on the way to (the) school, I met a cat wandering until in a wood building site ! I stumbled and tore my dress; also, the pretty pink ribbon that I carried in my hair east demolishes. At the nursery school, there were bicycles, scooters, and children who did not stop annoying me. This first day, I threw sand in the face of a small girl and I was punished. In class, my mistress told me stories every days, and one did many plays, it was great !

Ce que j'ai mis entre parenthese c'est qu'on le sous entend , mais normalement il n'est pas écrit lol .

East veut dire quoi au juste, car j'aurai bien voulu que Spirit m'explique cette phrase .... :-D

merci