bonjour, c'est un résumé d'anglais

Oula y'a beaucoup de faute .. je te corrige sa !

Oscar is a little boy of ten years old who lives in the hospital because of his illness : leukemia. His favourite nurse, advices him to write to god to tell him (la je vois pas ce que tu veux dire ...).
Since his transplant, the doctor looks sad and has pity for the young Oscar.
When Oscar speaks about death he has the impression to speak to a wall (si j'ai bien compris ta phrase ..). His parents are visiting him once a week, but Oscar isn't impatient to see them : he doesn't like his parents.
One day, his nurse " the pink lady" proposes him to play a game : to tell (to count : compter ...) every day for ten years .
Since then, Oscar hasn't stopped telling every step of his life .

Voila je pense que c'est sa, bon courage !

Tu as raison" a ten years old little boy "est mieu mais "a little boy of ten years old "n'est pas faux ..
Pour l'autre, c'est vrai que sa fait traduction mot a mot ..
"he has the feeling that he speaks to a wall " te va mieu ??