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SPORT AND SOCIETY :

For me, the sport can play an important role in the society.
People can to make friends in a sport club, when we are in a team, we become friends with the others members of the team.
People learn the team spirit and the solidarity, they learn to be tolerant, to take pat in a group, to get involved in the team.
But unfortunately, sometimes , there is discrimination and racism in sport.Because people make prejudice of someone just because the colour of his skin. But it’s few today.
Also, there is hooligan, a supporter(ou suporter je c pa) who is prepared to do anything for his team.They’re often violent.

But I think that sport is more positif(ou positive?) for the society. (For the ou for???)

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From my opinion, the sport has a good quest in the siciety.
On the group, an environment can be make like friendship. You can also meet more persons and why not discuss with them.
People learn the team spirit and the solidarity, they learn to be tolerant, to take pat in a group, to get involved in the team. dsl jcapte pas ce qe tu veux dire !
In addition, sometimes discrimination and racism can appear... just for skin's question.
Riff-raff (voyous) can be violent when they support their favorites team ( allez l'om ).
To conclude, I think that the sport brings more positive points on the society !

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bilingue mon gros ;-)

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lool na mé serieu chui tro ds la galere pr les devoirs de vacs la un de vou é doué en maths??
ou en fisik?
(chui en seconde)

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je vais être gentil car tu es nouveau
- pas de SMS
- pas me majuscule abusive
- il y a un forum spécial pour le travail

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In my opinion, sports has an important role in the society.
Players can make friends in a sports club, because of the team spirit and the solidarity that reigns in the club .
Players learn how to be tolerant, and also to get involved in the team.
But unfortunatly, descrimination and racism are present in some teams because of the prejudices of somes, and because of the colour of the skin .
But nowadays it is rare .
Hooligans are also well-knonw, they are suporters that are going to do anything so that they team wins . Oftenly, they are violent.
But I personally think that sports are positive for the society .

J'ai changé quelques phrases ....

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In my opinion, sports has an important role in the society.
Players can make friends in a sports club, because of the team spirit and the solidarity that reigns in the club .
Players learn how to be tolerant, and also to get involved in the team.
But unfortunatly, descrimination and racism are present in some teams because of the prejudices of somes, and because of the colour of the skin .
But nowadays it is rare .
Hooligans are also well-knonw, they are suporters that are going to do anything so that they team wins . Oftenly, they are violent.
But I personally think that sports are positive for the society .

J'ai changé quelques phrases ....

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In my opinion, sports has an important role in the society.
Players can make friends in a sports club, because of the team spirit and the solidarity that reigns in the club .
Players learn how to be tolerant, and also to get involved in the team.
But unfortunatly, descrimination and racism are present in some teams because of the prejudices of somes, and because of the colour of the skin .
But nowadays it is rare .
Hooligans are also well-knonw, they are suporters that are going to do anything so that they team wins . Oftenly, they are violent.
But I personally think that sports are positive for the society .

J'ai changé quelques phrases ....

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merci ^^ je cherchais un site de ce genre sa tombe bien !

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